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Heartlines 41 WIP

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Almost a new page. Not sure if this will actually be the next page or if I should add another one in between for a smoother transition. What do you guys think?


Daily doodle # 178 for the First Annual Doodlers Challenge
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JesnCin
I like the start-up panel, but something in my head wants a smoother transition (maybe from how the previous page ended) the obvious solution is to consult my foot :)
I agree with =Asatira though, some more dialogue would be nice!
daahhh don't tease me with that last panel >:c