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Crossroads Pages 12-13

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Weekly update! \o/



Also, *hint* kiriban *hint* :la:


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Caraphae's avatar
Oooh ominous undertones begin! Gimme backstory!XD

It is amazing how much having people talk around a character steals their agency. Will was no chattier in the last chapter, but here he's really feeling like a kid, or even a prop, instead of the protagonist, just because he's not saying much. And maybe because the camera is so focused on Kieran?

Also, good hands on this page!